Previously I have written that Sanskrit Poetry is very complicated and par excellence is immutably interwined with such concept as Alankara (Embellishment).
"Kavitvani" (कवित्वन - kavitvana) can be translated either as "Wisdom" or as "Poetic Gift" or "Poetic Genius" or "Poetic Artistry".
Actually, any person claiming to be a bhakti-yog in Gaudiya Parivara must be au courant in the poetic field.
The Rasika Path is the Path fraught with enormous danger, because it is basically enormously misunderstood and everyone must be on the qui vive, reading the Devotional Poetry of Gaudiya-Acharyas, because this Poetry is NOT so blunt and mundane as some harebrained buffons imagine it to be in their narrow-scoped heads.
The too literal and mundane interpretation of verses must be avoided and of course Bhagavan Shree Krishna is NOT primitive, plain, square simpleton, Who can be described as a lad living in Vrindavan, dancing from time to time and, excusez moi, eating sweet rice balls with friends.
Such simpletonic idea is obnoxious in all respects and of course it is not supported by Gaudiya-Acharyas.
If someone is really desperate to know about Bhagavan Shree Krishna, then one must study Six Sandarbhas of Shree Shreemad Jiva Goswami in which Shree Shreemad Jiva Goswami clearly states that Bhagavan Shree Krishna is Acintya (अचिन्त्य - acintya), Shuddha-Sattva, Agocara (अगोचर - agocara) LORD, WHO possesess SHAT-AISHVARYA (SIX UNIQUE DIVINE TRAITS) in a ne plus ultra degree.
Can the English of Gaudiya-Poetry translation be Rasika and what is "RasaSvadana"?
Splendid question, which entails the enormous bunch of problems, but before answering the question such term as "RasaSvadana" (or "RasaSvada" - रसास्वाद) must be explained.
In terms of Sanskrit Aesthetics "Rasa" can be vaguely translated as "Psychic and Spiritual experience", while "Svadana" translates like "the act of tasting".
If we use the simplified translation, then:
"Rasa" = "Juice, something, which can be tasted" and
"Svadana" = "to taste".
Aesthetic Svadana (tasting) is very complicated phenomenon, which consists of levels and sublevels of various psychic and emotional states (Bhavas, Anubhavas, Laya, Cittalaya and thousands of them).
Actually, the Devotional Poetry is the Juice and a bhakti-yog is a person who is endowed with capabilty to svadana (taste) this juice.
Why this happens? Everything is because of alankaras.
In fact, there is no proper way to render all the Sanskrit alankaras and poetic techniques in English and it's the problem of pitiful concern.
Imagine, that you are film-director and you have created the masterpiece movie. Imagine, that you have imbued every part of script and plot with special meaning and every part of movie is so important that it can't be amended at all.
But one day, out of blue, you find out that your masterpiece movie had been wrongly conveyed in movie theatres, because some scenes had been cut due to censorship, some music tracks had been changed and the voices of actors had been replaced to the foreign ones to make the movie suitable for international distribution.
Such situation actually happens with all the original Sanskrit Poetry.
Now, let's try to walk in the shoes of Sanskrit Author. When Sanskrit Authors had been creating the verses, they thought in Sanskrit and moreover, they supposed that only Sanskrit-speaking audience will be able to svadana (taste) this poetry.
That's why they have imbued their poetry with complicated puns, metaphors, allusions and thousands of other poetic tricks.
An example with "Bhkruti" (भृकुटी) from "Shree Ujvala-Nilamani".
An example with "Bhkruti" (भृकुटी) from "Shree Ujvala-Nilamani".
Let's grasp the nettle and see at the example from "Shree Ujvala-Nilamani" by Shree Shreemad Rupa Goswami.
I do remember that in one of the verses of "Shree Ujvala-Nilamani" (I am sorry, but I can't find this verse now) one Gopi notices in jest, that the other Gopi is so reserved today, that she reminds a bhkruti (भृकुटी).
"Bhkruti" (भृकुटी) is a rare word and it means the special kind of frog in Sanskrit.
And actually, the word "Bhkruti" (भृकुटी) enormously alters the perception of the verse. It is just one word, but it entails the following bunch of the assosiations:
1. The word "bhkruti" is funny itself and of course it causes the enormous gust of laughter in reader, that is Hasya-Rasa.
2. This word also points out the fact that these Gopis are very bosom friends and there is no reservation in their jokes towards each other (Sakhi-Rasa).
3. In terms of alankara word "bhkruti" conjuncts with other homonyms in the verse, creating beautiful semantic pattern.
4. This word is interwined in the sound pattern of the verse.
So, as it is seen, just one word in just one verse entails the enormous scope of Bhavas and Rasas in the reader.
But what about English translation?
Can the word "bhkruti" conveyed in English? Of course not.
It will be just a "frog" and if the translator is responsible enough he may point out that the special pun with the word "bhkruti" had been used in this verse, but in a stern reality most of the Sanskrit-English translators don't provide remarks at all.
It will be just a "frog" and if the translator is responsible enough he may point out that the special pun with the word "bhkruti" had been used in this verse, but in a stern reality most of the Sanskrit-English translators don't provide remarks at all.
So, the elision of just one word "bhkruti" leads to overall alteration of the verse and, confusion worse confounded, the Sanskrit sound pattern is lost forever, which is a drawback of sorrowful significance too.
So, there are 2 points to remember:
1) Semantic and sound patterns are lost forever in Sanskrit-English translations.
2) The verses of Gaudiya-Acharayas don't imply literal reading, but they imply the complicated aesthetic apprehension instead and the ability to grasp metaphors, puns and various Sanskrit Alankaras.
I have compiled this article, because there are more and more strange translations of Gaudiya Poetry these days. Some of the translations are too dry and emotion-void, others, au contraire, too emotional and sentimental. And neither of them is good, speaking truly. The sentimental ones are worst of the kind, because they act as a trap for silly people who erroneously claim that "Bhakti is an emotion".
If Bhakti would be an emotion, then we would be able to train dogs of Pavlov to be bhakti-yogs, but Bhakti-Yoga is more complicated experience, which imply very high literacy and Gyana.
In order to plunge in the discussed theme further, I just recommend to refer to "Chitra-Kavitvani" and examples of exquisite and complicated Poetry construction of Shree Shreemad Rupa Goswami.
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So, there are 2 points to remember:
1) Semantic and sound patterns are lost forever in Sanskrit-English translations.
2) The verses of Gaudiya-Acharayas don't imply literal reading, but they imply the complicated aesthetic apprehension instead and the ability to grasp metaphors, puns and various Sanskrit Alankaras.
I have compiled this article, because there are more and more strange translations of Gaudiya Poetry these days. Some of the translations are too dry and emotion-void, others, au contraire, too emotional and sentimental. And neither of them is good, speaking truly. The sentimental ones are worst of the kind, because they act as a trap for silly people who erroneously claim that "Bhakti is an emotion".
If Bhakti would be an emotion, then we would be able to train dogs of Pavlov to be bhakti-yogs, but Bhakti-Yoga is more complicated experience, which imply very high literacy and Gyana.
In order to plunge in the discussed theme further, I just recommend to refer to "Chitra-Kavitvani" and examples of exquisite and complicated Poetry construction of Shree Shreemad Rupa Goswami.
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